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Real Valladolid vs Barcelona: Why Player Mentality Matters

I know a lot of people will dismiss Barcelona’s match against already relegated Real Valladolid as unimportant. The match has been won, another three points to maintain the four-point lead against Real Madrid. Even if Valladolid had won or drawn the match, they were already relegated and Barcelona would still hold a lead over Madrid, no matter how slim it was.

Then considering the upcoming thrillers the new week has in store–the 2nd leg of the semi finals against Inter and the potential-title deciding El Clasico–the buzz from the Valladolid match died out a few hours after the final whistle was blown. 

I, however, still feel like there are some significant talking points from last weekend’s game against Valladolid.

Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.

The most important thing to talk about is, of course, the rotations.

When I saw the lineup, I was immediately amused. I had no doubts that we would win the match and I was pleased that so many of our key players got their much needed rest. With the exception of Pedri (who was subbed off after the first half) and Gerard Martin, there was no other player on the lineup that started the previous game against Inter.

So I was very happy. 

Looking critically at the lineup and the fact that Real Valladolid is the worst team in the league, I thought to myself that there is no way that Barcelona were not putting more than 3 goals past their opponents in this match. Even with the heavy rotations.

When the first half concluded, however, I paused and took some time to consider the players and how they conducted themselves during the first half.

Although Barcelona was trailing by one goal, I still had no doubts that we would win the match but I was beginning to see a clear contrast in the way these players took to the pitch.

To some players, this match was an audition. 

They were trying to show Flick, their teammates and the Barcelona fans that they deserved more playing time. They were trying to put their talents on display. I’m not saying it is a bad thing but I’m saying that it affected the way they played.

Starting with Pau Victor. After the first half, it was obvious that he was having a mediocre game. He created very few chances and was not very threatening to the Real Valladolid defense. If you compare his performance to Fermin’s, you can see a huge difference. 

Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.

Whenever Fermin was on the ball, the Valladolid defense immediately became alert. They moved to surround him, to stop him from running. Even when Lamine came on, their defenders still kept one eye on Fermin but their efforts were evidently not enough as he ended up scoring the winning goal.

The difference in performance, I’m certain, comes from a difference in mentality. Fermin knows that he will get minutes. He knows that no matter what happens, Hansi will play him. He knows that he will start in important matches and come on a sub to seal a victory or to force a win. This match was not an audition for Fermin. It was just another day on the job.

Unlike Pau Victor. And Ansu Fati and Hector Fort.

Speaking of Hector Fort, we could see another vast difference in mentality on the back line as well. Hector Fort was one of the players who visibly showed his displeasure at being stuck on the bench after the victory against Celta Vigo. The match against Valladolid was one of the few chances Hansi Flick gave him to start for Barcelona and while he had some flashes of brilliance, overall, his performance was nothing big.

Gerard Martin had a much better game and that is saying a lot.

Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.

Now, compare Hector Fort to Christensen. Christensen was brilliant on Saturday. Yes, it was against the lowest ranked team in La Liga. Yes, it was a match Barcelona controlled from the beginning to the end. However, his confidence and surety could not be denied. He was sharp when setting the offside trap. He was quick to recover the ball. This is another player that knows that no matter what happens, they will be getting minutes. And that confidence surely contributed to a calm and controlled performance from him.


Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.

Mentality is so important.  
It is one of things that makes players like Lamine and Raphinha special and in the game in Real Valladolid, it was the major difference between the players that had a good game and the players that didn’t.

Barcelona’s last 8 games: Can the Blaugrana clinch the La Liga title?


The last eight games of the 2024/2025 La Liga season is here and the race to crown the winners is well into its final days.

With Barcelona currently topping the league, with a 4 point lead over rivals, Real Madrid, the Blaugrana are the overwhelming favourites to clinch the title. Before the celebrations begin in earnest, however, it is necessary to determine the pitfalls, as well as the boons, that lie in Barcelona’s way.



Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the fixtures here.


On their road to their maiden La Liga title under a new manager, Flick’s men will face off against Leganes, Celta de Vigo, Mallorca in April then Real Valladolid, Real Madrid, Espanyol, Villarreal and Athletic Club in May.


While these fixtures might look relatively easy, especially with the Champions League in view, there are a couple of issues the team might face in their quest to lift the cup.


Fatigue


In recent days, it seems like this word has become more and more prevalent in the footballing community and for good reason. As the season comes to a close, the competition for trophies becomes more intense and the match schedule becomes even more unbearable.


In fact, by the 5th of April, Hansi Flick’s men came off a grueling match schedule that saw them play 4 matches in 10 days. Even with significant rotations and substitutions, fatigue continued to build up until it reached a peak in the match against Real Betis where the Blaugrana were held to a 1-1 draw by the in-form and motivated Betis side.


This unending fatigue is worsened by the fact that Barcelona’s opponents are not similarly burdened by other obligations and can play their well-rested first team against a tired, rotated Barcelona side.


Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.


Mallorca and Celta de Vigo are good examples of this. In this final stretch of the campaign, both teams are not bothered by any European competitions or domestic cup obligations, leaving the league as their main focus. 


Barcelona, on the other hand, is in search of an elusive and seriously difficult quadruple, leaving the team determined but stretched thin on all fronts. And while Barcelona might consider their ambitions noble and lofty, they face opponents with similar ambitions, albeit in a different form.


Leganes and Espanyol are teams that are struggling against the bitter threat of relegation and will do anything in their power to remain in Spanish football’s top flight. These teams, including Real Valladolid, who at this point is mathematically relegated, are willing to fight to the end to secure as many points as possible. 


That their opponent is Barcelona will surely mean little to them as they battle on the pitch.


On the other side of the spectrum, we have teams that are not in a relegation fight but in a battle of their own. Athletic Club’s draw against Villarreal on the 6th of April means that the fight for European competition spaces is heating up.


Barcelona will have to face both of these sides at the very end of the season, with the match against Athletic Club bringing the 2024/2025 season to an end.


Facing a host of determined clubs towards the end of the season will be more than a little rough on the title-seeking Barcelona side. I can only hope that we make it to the end without any serious injuries.


Real Madrid: Another El Classico for the history books


Despite having a rough beginning to their title defense, Real Madrid predictably established themselves as Barcelona’s major co-contenders to win the league. And with just 4 points separating the two sides, it is very possible that the El Classico, fixed for the 11th of May, decides the title winners.


Mind you, Real Madrid is also in the running for a treble: being 2nd in the league, reaching the final in the Copa del Rey, and joining the final eight in the Champions League after defeating city rivals, Atletico de Madrid, in a contentious penalty shootout. 


It is safe to say that the Galacticos will be pouring their energy into securing at least one of a possible three trophies.


Revenge for their humiliation (0-4 in October and 5-2 in January) at our hands will also be a motivation for the Los Blancos when we meet once more in the league.



Bearing all of this in mind, it seems like Barcelona’s path to glory is not as straightforward as it initially seemed.


However, I have reason to believe that not only will Barcelona clinch the La Liga, they will also go on to challenge for the Champions League.


Versatility and Depth


“October FC” was the most common nickname for FC Barcelona after they endured a bad string of losses, draws and narrow wins in the months of November and December.


Fans and neutrals alike felt like Hansi Flick’s side lost their verve, danger and attacking prowess after October saw them pull massive victories against Bayern Munich and Real Madrid within the space of seven days.


“Lamine FC” was another mocking jab that quickly arose as that rough patch coincided with Lamine Yamal’s sidelining due to an injury. Was Barcelona really nothing without the charismatic winger?


Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.


No.


Like all hastily assembled teams cobbled together under a new manager, Barcelona was undergoing a transitional phase, made even more stark by the absence of Lamine on the right wing, a stabilizing force like Frenkie de Jong in the midfield (Pedri was working so hard on his own) and versatile players to fill in spaces with the needed skill.


Once that transitional period ended, we saw a new Barcelona rise from the ashes. A Barcelona that could go toe-to-toe with Europe’s best teams and come out on top. A Barcelona that could rotate, resting 3 or 4 players in the starting eleven and still pull off incredible performances.


A Barcelona that could score goals even with a man sent off. A Barcelona that could equalize and win games despite being 2 goals down. A Barcelona that could set pristine offside traps and still drop deep to defend.


That transitional period ended up being for the best, turning out to be like fire to an ore, blasting away impurities and leaving us with finished pure metal. Gold.


Out of the fire came players like Eric Garcia who is typically regarded a backup for the centreback position, now playing comfortably as a central defensive midfielder when needed. 


Ferran Torres, nicknamed “The Shark”, picked up incredible form, scoring 9 league goals and assisting thrice in 23 games, despite only starting in 9 of those games. Ferran is more than a “super sub” for Lewandoski though, effortlessly filling in the left wing position if need be.


Many fans were ecstatic to see Gavi return to football after a horrific injury saw his 2023/2024 season come to a sputtering halt. Gavi’s reintroduction was not without its challenges, however. After a few lackluster performances, some took to social media to point out Gavi’s weaknesses.


One statement that almost drove me crazy was “Maybe Gavi isn’t the player we used to know.”


I almost tore my hair from its roots. 


Fans can be so reactionary, sometimes.


It was obvious to the blind that Gavi needed some playing time to readjust and get his mind and body used to the demands of professional football. And when he did, we began to remember why Gavi won the Golden boy award in 2022.


Scoring the first goal in our win against Athletic Club in the Supercopa semifinal and winning his first Man of the Match award, since his return, in our draw against Real Betis, it is safe to say that we can count on Gavi as the season winds down.


It is not just the players returning from injury and versatile subs that give me hope for this section of the campaign. 


Flick has revamped some of the starting players, transforming them to their footballing best, leading to an even better team.

Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.


Raphinha is enjoying his best season of football with Flick, sitting atop the Champions League goal leaderboard with 11 goals in that competition. The Brazilian seems renewed under Flick, basking in the positional flexibility the German coach gives him.


I know a lot of people would disagree with this but despite Raphinha’s incredible transformation, I feel like Balde is the most transformed player under Flick. 


With Raphinha given positional freedom, the winger often drifts inside or even over to the right in his attempt to create chances and score goals, leaving the entire left wing to…Balde.


Who has done a great job for sure. 


The increased responsibility is a boon for the left-back with his pace, ability to put in some great crosses and take on defenders one-on-one.

In fact, during the match against Girona, Balde played as a winger for a few minutes when he was substituted in although his starting position was still being occupied by Gerard Martin.


I’m not quite sure we will see it this season but I think a time is coming when we might see Balde get more minutes in the left winger position. And I cannot wait.


Understanding between players 


Winning a treble is no easy feat. You need a complete and cohesive squad. Not just a squad full of skilled players in every position but a squad that can rotate and still produce wonderful results.


Rotation can be damning. In some instances, you will need to bring on players who are not as skilled to give the starters some rest and time to recover from injury.

We’ve seen Gerard Martin come in to relieve Balde and Hector Fort start in Kounde’s stead. Pau Victor is seen as one of the replacements for Lewandoski in the striker position and has started a game in place of the Polish striker this season.


When the first round of rotations began in November, we saw the immediate drop in performance from the team. Part of this could be attributed to Lamine’s absence, yes, but the lack of communication and chemistry between some team members contributed to the dropped points.


As we face the end of the season, however, things have changed for the better. Flick has introduced more rotations and with every match day, the connection between players deepens and their understanding of each other’s playing style is refined.


All in all, this results in a more cohesive squad. A squad that can rotate key players and deliver equal impact on the pitch. A quadruple-contesting squad.


Conclusion


Regardless of how this season ends, the 2024/2025 campaign has been a record-breaking season for the Blaugrana. Full of excitement, controversy and hope, this season has etched itself permanently into the minds of Culers around the world, delivering instant classics for years to come.


Image from Barcelona’s official website. See the website here.


By the end of May, all competitions will come to a close and we will hopefully have more trophies to boast about. 

 Demon Lord 2099 is an fantasy/sci-fi anime that centres around the Demon Lord Veltol and his resurrection in the new world of Fantasion. The anime was released on the 13th of October 2024. I recall adding it to my list of shows to watch but only recently got around to actually watching it.

It is based on a light novel of the same title by Daigo Murasaki and was animated by J.C.Staff. Currently, it has 12 episodes and I’m not quite sure if more are planned.

The first episode introduces us to a great war between immortals and magic-wielding mortals in the fantasy world of Alnaeth. The war has apparently been raging for some time, claiming countless lives and causing destruction. The battle comes to an end, however, when the Demon Lord Veltol Velvet Velsvalt is defeated by the hero Gram.

As Veltol “dies”, Gram declares that the reason he lost to a human is because of the perseverance and grit of the human race.

That is not the end of the Demon Lord though, as he is resurrected by his loyal servant, Machina, about 500 years later. After appreciating her faithfulness, he rises, eager to conquer the world once more.

He is, however, warned by Machina that things have changed while he slumbered. This is a different reality. The magic of Alnaeth and the technology of Earth have fused to create Fantasion, a new world. This fusion did not come without its troubles. Civil wars broke out due to prejudice between the races, resulting in city-states, which devolved into more conflict. Despite the dark past, Fantasion is now a stable environment, balanced between magic and technology.

Together, they set out to understand how Veltol fits into this new reality.

The scenes after this are quite typical. Veltol absorbs the new city-state of Shinjuku. In a fit to display his strength, he fires a magical spell, triggering alarms all around the city. Machina springs into action, leading him away from the scene before enforcement arrives.

While they hide, she explains to him that magic has been outlawed in the major cities and that immortals have been hunted down and killed. The whereabouts of most of his followers is unknown. Notably, when Veltol asks about Marcus, one of Veltol’s Six Dark Peers, Machina dodges the question, dashing away to get him a drink.

While he awaits her return, the billboards and displays around him are hacked to display risquƩ images. Veltol tracks down the hacker and after a bit of talking, asks her about Marcus.

The hacker points him in the direction of Ishimaru Heavy Magical Industries, stating that Marcus is the director of the company. Veltol heads to the building and is welcomed by Marcus’s secretary who takes him to Marcus. Veltol tries to get Marcus to rejoin him in his quest for world domination but Marcus refuses, calling the Demon Lord weak and obsolete.

He then demonstrates this by striking out at Veltol, much to the latter’s surprise. Marcus explains the “familia” technology, a tool that allows normal humans to utilize magic, despite lacking magical affinity.

Veltol is expelled from the tower with a wave of Marcus’s hand, landing harshly in the city down below. Machina rescues him and leads him to her apartment. Initially believing the space to be a storeroom, Veltol is disillusioned by her living conditions. Eventually, he promises to repay her loyalty and conquer the world once more.

My thoughts on the first episode of Demon Lord 2099

I didn’t enjoy it.

In my opinion, the premise is common enough but there is nothing new under the sun so I wasn’t expecting a completely unique plot and storyline. The delivery, however, is what I find fault with.

The worldbuilding was fine. The opening of every anime, show, manga, novel and film typically carries a lot of information for the consumer.

What I found lacking was the dialogue.

When Gram, the hero, defeats the Demon Lord, he gives a speech about human resilience and courage. I found the speech to be bland and uninspiring. Later, when the Demon Lord is conversing with the hacker, the dialogue was basic and lacked wit and direction. It felt like the writers forced the scene just to show us that that hacker would become important later in the show.

I had similar problems with his conversation with Marcus. The revelation of Marcus as the antagonist, I felt, was too sudden and lacked any kind of flair. Even worse, Marcus devolved into a sales-like presentation to explain to the Demon Lord why Veltol’s magic was no longer powerful enough.

The animation was nothing special but I am not one to comment on animation quality, as it is not one of my concerns. If the plotline is good and the characters are intriguing, that’s enough for me. Animation quality only comes into my mind if the show meets those benchmarks.

The opening song was nice. It suited the cyberpunk/fantasy theme well, serving as a nice soundtrack to the opening sequence.

Verdict

I don’t think I’ll carry on with this anime, especially as there are many others on my list that look much more promising. I typically apply a 3-episode rule but the first episode did not do enough to draw me in.

What do you think about Demon Lord 2099?


 The Best Anime Movie: Makoto Shinkai’s Five Centimeters per Second


Whenever the name Makoto Shinkai is mentioned, it is attended by praises of his creative directing and writing, most frequently the blockbuster, “Your Name.” 

“Your Name” brought Makoto’s excellence to the fore, making him a household name in the world of anime movies. Yet, I would argue that his earlier works, although much less known, are the crowning jewel of his storytelling ability.


Five Centimeters per Second is a romantic drama released in 2007. It centres around the protagonist, Tohno Takaki and three defined periods of his life. The movie was Shinkai’s seventh but only his second work of feature length. The film received positive reviews—it was awarded Best Animated Feature Film at the 2007 Asian Pacific Screen Awards and was Japan’s fourth most popular Blu-ray film in the following year— further boosting Makoto’s standing as a writer and director.



Five Centimeters per Second shows Takaki and his relationship—and eventual separation—with his friend, Akari Shinohara.

The movie is presented as a romantic drama exploring the blooming love between the protagonists. As the ending credits roll, however, romance is the last thing on the viewer’s mind. That is because, despite the initial impression and presentation, Five Centimeters per Second is a story of the inevitability of time. It is a tale of separation, consequences of enduring distance and the bittersweet pain of hope.

It is a depiction of loneliness, sadness and love in spite of it all.


Episode 1: Cherry Blossom


The first of the three acts is entitled “Cherry Blossom” and aptly starts with the line: “They say it’s five centimetres per second…the speed at which cherry blossoms fall.”

This section tells us the story of Takaki and Akari in elementary school and right from the start, Shinkai seems to emphasize the eventual separation of the protagonists.

In the first scene, after commenting on the speed of cherry blossom descent, Akari dashes away, running across the level crossing just as the gates come down, leaving Takaki stuck on the other side.

The next scene shows us Takaki reading a letter from Akari. It soon becomes evident that they are separated. Akari has transferred to another school after elementary school and now, their only interaction is by the letters they send.

In her letters, she mentions the changing of the seasons—the switch from summer to autumn and then winter; her changing situation—her new hairstyle, her new schedule, her new dressing; and Takaki’s changing distance—his parents’ impending transfer to Kagoshima.

As Akari’s voice narrates her letters, we are treated to bits and pieces of Takaki’s life. He isn’t lonely. We never read or hear Takaki narrate his letters, although we are certain he replies. In fact, they agree to meet up one time before Takaki transfers and the distance between them becomes insurmountable.

March 4th is the date set for their meeting and Takaki’s journey via train is chock-full of metaphors that prophesy the end of their relationship.

Takaki plans his trip meticulously, listing out stations, departure and arrival times. He also takes with him a similarly carefully crafted letter, a result of weeks of pondering, confessing his feelings to Akari.

With hope and more than a little desperation, Takaki boards the first train and we get the first glimpse into his mind. As the journey begins, our protagonist reflects on his relationship with Akari. They were both bookworms, bonding instantly over their shared love for the written word.

“Because our bodies were still small, frail, and prone to illness, the two of us preferred the library over playing on the sportsfield.”

Their relationship draws the attention of their classmates, who tease them. But as Takaki notes, “as long as [they] were together, strangely, things like that didn’t scare [them]”.

The strength of their relationship is such that Takaki feels like they’ll remain together from that point on. Life, however, makes a mockery of Takaki’s plans. Akari transfers away and as reflected in the present, the train taking him to her is delayed.

Just as it never occurred to Takaki that they wouldn’t spend the rest of their lives together, it never occurred to him that the snow would cause disruptions in the train service.

Slowly, we watch as Takaki’s carefully constructed plans fall away. At every stop, at every station, the delays increase. The initial meeting time of 7 pm comes and goes. Takaki’s train is stuck in the middle of nowhere for two hours.

“Every minute felt like an eternity.”

To make matters inexorably worse, the letter he painstakingly penned slips from his pocket and is lost to the wind. Lost and distraught, Takaki takes off his watch and places it next to one of the windows on the train. He can’t bear to look at the time. He feels as if time itself holds a clear malice towards him.

Finally, the train arrives at Akari’s home station of Iwafune, more than five hours after the predicted time. It is past eleven at night. The station is deserted, snow blankets everything in sight and yet, tucked into a corner of the small, lonely station is Akari.

She waited.

Despite the delays, despite the snow, disregarding the time, she waited. Takaki is elated. He calls out her name and she looks up, meeting his eyes with tears.

In an instant, the disappointment, the desperation, the anger and bitterness is wiped away. The kids share a meal, a kiss and a short walk around the quiet town.

“I clearly knew that from that point on, we wouldn’t be together forever.”

Morning seems to come too quickly and soon, Takaki is boarding the train to return home. Once again, Shinkai makes time the enemy, showing us that no matter how much our protagonists try to hold on, it remains elusive, like grains of sand slipping through a clenched fist.

As the train rolls away, Akari reveals a letter of her own, tucked into her pocket.

The episode comes to an end with Takaki staring out the window as the train pulled away, pondering his relationship with Akari and the uncertainty of time.

This episode is a masterpiece in subtleties. With often overlooked details, Shinkai communicates the themes of his story. Takaki crumbling his drafted schedule when it became apparent all trains would be delayed. Life is fickle and pays no heed to our plans. 

At the end of the episode, it is almost impossible to predict the end of the story. Will Takaki and Akari meet again? Will they reunite in their later years, look back at their youth with laughter in their eyes?

If you look at what lies beneath the surface, however, the future becomes apparent.


Episode 2: Cosmonaut


Episode 2 is titled “Cosmonaut” and offers a glimpse of Tohno Takaki’s life from a new perspective. We see Takaki at his new school in Kagoshima through the eyes of his classmate, Sumida Kanae. Before long, it is apparent that Sumida has a crush on Takaki and is struggling with the right way to present her emotions. In that way, Sumida seems a lot like the younger Takaki.

She narrates their time together as we watch Takaki through her eyes. This is a new Takaki. In the previous act, while he was never extroverted and seemed quite reserved, Takaki was not lonely. 

This Takaki seems lonely.

His words sound a little more measured, his expressions much more mute. This Takaki is…silent, trudging through life with a weight on his shoulders.

Sumida notes that Takaki is always texting someone on his phone. When Sumida asks who, he replies dismissively: “A friend in Tokyo.” 

When a classmate pokes fun at Takaki, saying “that’s your girlfriend” in a way that mirrors the mockery with Akari. Takaki’s response, however, is wildly different. He brushes off the teasing with a brusque “she’s not my girlfriend” and carries on with his meal. 

All the while, Sumida struggles with her feelings for Takaki. Indecision besets her. Should she confess or leave her emotions unexpressed? Shinkai expands this feeling of indecision to her education, showing her struggles to decide a path after high school. A community college? Work? Trade school?

She can’t come to a decision. On their way home together, Takaki assures her that her uncertainty is okay and that he also struggles with indecision, no matter how put together he may seem. The words strengthen Sumida and she humorously folds her career information form into a paper plane.

Where does the title of this episode come from? Shinkai doesn’t leave us wondering for too long. 

“Cosmonaut” is a term used to describe Russian astronauts. 

“They say it’s five kilometers per hour,” Sumida says as they wait behind a barrier, watching a massive rocket crawl past. “It’s going to the Minamitane Launch Facility.”

Takaki and Sumida live near this facility and a launch is being planned. 

“It’s supposed to go to the far reaches of the solar system, no matter how many years it takes,” Takaki replies and we begin to peek behind the title of this act.

Despite the fact that the launch is unmanned, Takaki ponders at the loneliness the probe is bound to encounter, speeding through the vastness of space.

Does Takaki see himself as a cosmonaut, hurtling through emptiness for a future—or a past—he cannot reach? Perhaps.

“I wonder when I got into the habit of writing messages to nobody?” Takaki later muses and for a brief moment, we get another glimpse into our elusive protagonist’s mind. Dedicatedly and diligently, he types out long messages into his phone. After writing, however, he hits the delete button, erasing everything.

Yes, Takaki is lonely.

Sumida, on the other hand, is on a high. After six months of effort, she is able to surf the waves, standing proud atop her board. Riding that high, she decides to confess to Takaki on their way home. Just as she is about to speak, however, a thundering sound fills the air, rattling the skies.

The rocket is going off, launching into the vastness of space. Its afterburners split the sky into two, painting it with a surreal beauty.

Transfixed by the image, the two teenagers stare at the departing rocket, watching until it escapes the earth.

Finally, Sumida understands. “I felt like I somewhat came to understand why Tohno-kun was different from the other boys…[he] was always looking far beyond me. Far beyond me, towards something in the distance.”

The episode comes to an end with Sumida acknowledging that she will still love Tohno despite her emotions remaining unreciprocated.

Once again, Shinkai brings us face-to-face with time and its overarching power on our lives. Did Akari and Takaki grow apart, their relationship broken by distance and time? We aren’t told. We can only infer.


Episode 3: Five Centimeters per Second


The third episode is titled “Five centimeters per second,” a powerful portend to what the episode entails. 

In the second episode, Takaki’s loneliness seemed to weigh upon him. In this act, however, he is positively crushed under its weight.

For the first time since the initial episode, we see Akari. Not as a recollection or as a yearning in Takaki’s mind but as a person.

She is engaged and is planning her marriage. The soft falling snow triggers her memory and she recalls Iwafune, that fateful town where the young lovers promised to see the cherry blossoms together.

A promise that held Takaki in its grasp for all the years since it was made.

The difference between adult Akari and Takaki is stunning. And it is a difference Shinkai wants us to absorb in its entirety.

Akari is happy, discussing her wedding plans with her parents. Takaki is an alcoholic and has just quit his job. In a text so reminiscent of Sumida’s realizations, Takaki’s girlfriend says: “Even now, I still love you but even if we had a thousand text messages back and forth, our hearts probably wouldn’t have moved even 1 centimeter closer.”

Throughout this movie, we have seen Takaki through a variety of mediums. Through his letters with Akari, through the eyes of a besotted classmate, through slices of his life.

Now, however, we are given surplus insight into Takaki’s thoughts, his emotions and his actions. In steady but gradual increments, the curtain rises and we see Takaki.

His life is falling apart. A relationship of three years ends via email. A resignation letter submitted. Cans and bottles of alcohol litter his room and cigarette ash dots the windowsill.

Takaki is lonely.

In a supermarket, Takaki encounters a magazine detailing the adventure of the spaceship that left earth during his high school days. The deep space exploration vessel is finally out of the solar system. A lonely journey of nine years.

The ending song rolls in and fittingly, it is a song about loss. 

“I am constantly searching for you in places I know you can’t be.”

There is no more dialogue, internal or otherwise. As the masterful Masayoshi Yamazaki belts, we are treated to a montage of clips. Memories, glimpses of their very different lives.

As the film comes to an end, Takaki arrives at a train crossing and as he walks across to the other side, he passes a woman.

Akari?

He gasps and spins around just as the gates are coming down. He tries to get a better look but one train—then another—zips in front of him. When the trains finally zoom past and the gates climb up, the woman is gone.

Does Takaki dash across the crossing, chasing the woman down the street? She couldn’t have gone far. He can find her.

I half-expect him to. After all, this is what the film has been about, right? Desperate hands reaching out for someone so cruelly ripped out of his grasp. The love of his life. 

But he doesn’t. Instead, he smiles—a soft, sad smile—and walks away.


What is Five Centimeters per Second about?

Maybe that’s what Shinkai wants us to understand.

Loss is inevitable. Time is unstoppable. There are some distances that are uncrossable. Loneliness and sadness are an unavoidable part of living.

Takaki says it best.

“Through the act of living itself, sadness piles up here and there.”

I have seen other watchers accuse Takaki of obsession. 

“He was too obsessed.” “He couldn’t move on.” 

Is Takaki a weak-willed soul, unable to let go of a childhood crush? A pitiful man, wary of reality? A person who lacks focus, wandering through life without any definite direction?


Shinkai invites us to ponder. And the answer becomes clear the closer we look. Life is full of these disappointments. Parents transferring to a different city, trains getting stuck in a winter storm, letters disappearing into the wind, losing contact with a dear friend.

How do people cope?

Some people move on quickly, shaking off the vestiges of the past. Others linger, weighed down by the memories of a better time.

Five Centimeters per Second is a story of loss, told through the life of Tohno Takaki. It is a story that forces us to examine ourselves and our reaction to life’s inevitabilities. 


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